I haven't read it, but from what I've heard I don't expect it gets any better.

The biggest reason I've *heard* of it is that the author was So Young when he wrote it. Rather like the vast majority of truly bad fanfic. I feel slightly guilty reading the sporking of Mary Sues, because the poor little darlings are twelve and don't really know any better... *I* wrote like that when I was twelve... But when such a thing actually makes it into publication, vigorous poking with kitchen implements is allowed. :)